Orchid

Orchid is my second sister. She is someone whom I can talk to. She is very supportive.

There was a girl named orchid.

She always act like a kid.

She can be silly 

and she is very skinny.

Best of all, she is always supported. 

Author's Note

What do you think of the dialogue. Please tell me what I can improve on. I am hoping to read this poem to her.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the complete poem. You made dear Orchid come alive for the reader. I liked the description of her. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fairy]

Thank you for taking your time to read this. ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.