Mi Amor

Recollecting memories with my love, friend and husband.

I live to love,

to love you.

My heart's fluttering,

while remembering,

those moments,

when we lay in beach,

holding hands, eating something of a peach.

My arms still lingering,

your gentle snuggling,

to comfort me,

when I cried,

due to bad day at work.

My eyes tearing,

thoughts of which I am bearing,

when you lent,

your care and support hard,

while I laid in a hospital ward.

My brains a slush,

due to chemo rush,

but you are always beside,

to keep me aside,

from dark thoughts that batters me inside.

I feel hopeless,

you give me strength nevertheless,

to make my pain less.

You live to love,

to love me.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

I like the content; I would prefer the present tense like "my heart flutters" or "my arms still linger" or "my eyes tear" instead of the "ING" it come across much easier to read. keep going!!!