All the Colors of the Rainbow

Napo #3 story of a girl who only know s happiness

She's endless happiness

Complete hope

and unconditional love

She's everything

She doesn't know

The emotion of anger

Or how to hopeless

She's doesn't know

How not to love

She's all the colors of the rainbow

Red

She's life

She's vitality

She's warm and loving

Sge brings endless enthusiams

and intrest in all lives

 

She's orange

Endurance

And energy

Confident

She creativity and

She's luck

 

 She's Yellow

Pure and clear

Joy and peace

She makes you aware of all

The good in your life

And doesn't let you forget it

She makes it easier to live

 

She's green

She's safe

She balance

She's harmony

 

She's all the colors of the rainbow

She sings the praises of the Earth

And she shows her endless love

She's everything from happiness and joy

To hope and love

 

She's a miracle.....

 

Author's Note

This poem failed in my eyes completely... It doesn't who i was talking about any justice at all. Tell me what you think and how i could make it better

Reviews

[Secondhand Tink]

I loved reading this I got a real feel for the colours and the descriptions were just lovely.

well done :)

[Drakana Wind]

I like how you described the hypothetical girl, especially through the imagery of using colors. However, I can't decide whether I like the way you used the colors because I feel like if you say that "she's all the colors of the rainbow", you should use all the colors of the rainbow in your poem, but if you did use all the colors, it would have been too long, and it's nice the length it is.