No False Hope

Napo #5

Gentle Scream

And soft cires

You wonder where

you left your dreams

 

Hopeless and forlorn

Your lost in this world

Don't know which way to turn

 

You wish you had a place to hide

somewhere you knew love would reside

There is no place

for safety

In a world where lies

become reality

 

No place to run

No place to hide

No false hope

to get you through another day

You want only to leave this place.....

 

Author's Note

Not my best but i had no inspiration

Reviews

[Drakana Wind]

It's good for no inspiration, but it also leaves a lot of room for improvement. The rhythm was iffy and you had a few misspellings. However, I did like the idea of the poem, just the choppiness didn't do it justice.