Wishes

A Poem by Tallulah

NaPo # 6

Wish you knew who I am

Not who I was

We pretend

We're the same

But we know

We're not

Images of Ripples

Imperfection forever in the way

You don't know me anymore

© 2009 Tallulah

Author's Note

quick took like 3 minutes so it sucks

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Drakana Wind

It so does not suck!! I think it's great. It's simple, yes, but also effective in getting the point across. It isn't too wordy, yet it is also not underworded (if that's a word).

Posted 17 Years Ago

brittneymarie

No I dont think it sucked I thought it was pretty good for being written in 3 minutes. Plus all your emotions and thoughts come out easiar when your writing fast.

But good job, I liked it :]

,BrittneyMarie

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on April 7, 2009
Last Updated on April 9, 2009

Author

Tallulah

NY

About

Hi! My name's Tallulah! I'm a 16 year old girl. There's not much to say about me. I like to write, draw, read and run. I love music and am trying to learn to play the guitar....failing at it though. I.. more..