A Riddle

I'm the unsolvable, the riddle that you never get, I'm the unundestandable.

You don't know

Who I am

No matter how close  you are to me

There is something you

Don't see

 

I'm the riddle you can't solve

The puzzle with a missing piece

The place with an unknown secret passage

 

You wish to decipher me

But there is always something hidden

It impossible

To completely

Know me

So stop pretending that you do.

 

Author's Note

*cries* last poem of NaPo. Its so heartbreaking. i haven't written this much in such a long time. It felt so good. Farewell napo I will miss thee. I will await your return next year. <3 So anywaqys tell what you think about the poem.
<3 Tallulah

Reviews

[SetApartGirl]

very nice poem. I liked it a lot. I do have one critique. you spelled "place" palce but Im sure somebody has already told you that...

[UpComesDown]

Great flow with this one. I like the tone of bitterness mixed with smuggness... or maybe thats just ow i took it. Anyway fantastic job on this one.

[Amalie]

i liked this one a lot! (yeahhh and i'm just about the only person who let napo kick my butt >< haha totally forgot about it like a week in XD ^^; lol) but i liked this a lot especially the last 2 stanzas, i just really liked the flow of them

"I'm the riddle you can't solve

The puzzle with a missing piece

The palce with an unknown secret passage



You wish to decipher me

But there is always something hidden

It impossible

To completely

Know me

So stop pretending that you do."

great job Tallulah :3

[Lexi Nicole]

Wow we really did have a twin moment with author's notes.

[Judith Gayle Nail]

{You don't know

Who I am

No matter how close you are to me

There is something you

Don't see}.... sooooo true of ALL of us, eh?
This is a favorite already, of all I have read on here!
Judy