Friends

He says were friends

That he cares about me

But he doesn't even know

Who I am...

 

I'm like the shadow

Hidden in the darkness to him

He doesn't know my favorite color

Or my hyper tendencies

He knows only one of my friends

And yet

He still claims that

He's my friend

 

He lies

I can tell

He has no idea who I am

You can't care for someone

You don't know

 

And the way he speaks to me

So cold

And so distance

He wishes

That I'd leave him alone

He doesn't get

That him he told me

To go away

Then I would disappear

Never to return again....

 

He claims to be my friend

But I can see

He wishes I would leave him alone

He wishes I would disappear...

 

Author's Note

...i don't know about this one... i know that i'm trying to avoid my spanish haiku......

Reviews

[visions of doom]

a very sad poem , we start out being friendly , we hope that friendliness develops into friendship and from that into something more sometimes . unfortunately , being human , we get it wrong sometimes and those we thought were friends hurt us but true friendship , we carry with us through eternity , so never stop trying to find it gorgeous , there are some wonderful people out there and they offer genuine friendship .
brilliantly written poem . very well done .

[Crazy Cat Man]

I like this poem. But it does remind me of a girl i want to avoid. I'll do nice things for her but deep inside I don't want to her special friend. It's hard to break a friendship up when its going to hurt someone's feelings. Nothing is easy.

[xXbloodyVampire]

i liked it.
very sad but cute.

[Marlena]

saaaad but good job ^^

[Amalie]

awwww dinosaur :3 i like this one its sweet and sad >< nd if i ever find a guy like that my foot will be so far up his a*s you won't be able to see my leg anymore :3