Explosion

happens every night getting louder and louder each time

Explosion

It happens every single night

Getting louder and more dangerous as time

Continues to fly by

 

Explosion

Not one of fire and flames

but one of harsh words, raised voices, and threats

that results in tears and heart break

 

Explosion

Makes you wish for isolation and protection

For comfort and something to hide in

But in an explosion like this

there is no safe zone

No isolation

the damage is wide spread

kind of makes you wish you were dead

 

Explosion

 

 

Author's Note

hmmm written uickly but i kinda like it. I think i might have over done it with the repetitiopn of explosion but let me know what u guys think.
<3 Tallulah

Reviews

[Passingdaze]

no...you nailed it dead on. excellent delivery. this piece is absolutely wonderful.

[Through the Gateway]

I like the repetition, but you're right...there was one too many. I think, perhaps, that if you tried ending it before the last "explosion", you might get what you're shooting for.

Otherwise, it's a great piece. I like the idea behind it and you execute it very well.

[Marlena]

I like this, but I feel like it's missing something. Also, I like the repetition thing XD

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I relate so well to it.
"No isolation

the damage is wide spread

kind of makes you wish you were dead"
I think was the best part!!
amazing work.
Thanks for sharing.