Broken

He's so broken. Like shattered glass scattered on the concrete, unable to be put back together. I wish I could make him whole, mend his heart, make him see that I do love him. I'm just afraid. He doesn't trust anyone any more and I'm slightly afraid that's my fault. He thinks he has no one to turn to. I wish he saw me standing next to where I've always been and never left. I miss him and I love him but he's just so broken. Like shattered glass scattered on concrete. I'm helpless because I'll never be able to fix him... Never be able to make him whole.

Author's Note

hey guess i havent been on in ages and i miss u guys so much. hope u like the poem! remember u review me and i'll review you.
<3 Tallulah

Reviews

[Destinee]

lovely poem. it evokes so many emotions for me because i can place myself in both of these personas. i like how it kind of indirectly repeats itself. it seems to fit with the imagery of being broken and i don't know anymore i seem to have lost my words. anyway, this was an awesome write that pulled me into the many layers of feeling.