Spider Webs

And that night magic fell from the sky and lit up the world. everything would be possible with just a little bit of hope.

We stepped through the cold grass
The dew tickling our bare feet
You giggled in the dark
Watching the moon
You screamed in shock
Frantically brushing the
remnants of the silver spider web
you just stepped through
I laughed and grabbed your hand
And we continued our walk through the dew filled grass

That's when I saw it
It was like an explosion of light
Fire mixed with lightning
Moonlight mixed with starlight
Sunlight mixed with twilight
You didn't notice
But I saw it all

It was like magic has fallen from the sky
As if something so pure and good
Had leaked from the heavens above
Just to bless the earth with its presence
I took it as a sign
And I knew that
No matter what happened
That night
Anything would be possible
All it would take was a little be of love
Hope and
Pureness of heart

I had it all and I knew
That this would work
I grabbed by the hand and kissed you
"I love you"
Soft sweet whisper
Carried upon a soft gentle breeze

One look into you're eyes
And I knew
I had won you
That night

I thank the magic that fell
From the sky.

Author's Note

Written quickly and plus it like 11:30 and been a long day i'm sleepy so it not very good. let me know if u find mistakes and what you thinks.
Love,
Tallulah <3

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

That's when I saw it
It was like an explosion of light
Fire mixed with lightning
Moonlight mixed with starlight
Sunlight mixed with twilight
You didn't notice
But I saw it all
Love this prt, to me it adds a little suspense and u want to know wat happend. Nice vivid imagery here and i thought it was sweet and cute! Anither awesome poen from you! :)

[Marlena]

I really liked this ^_^ There are a few mistakes though, just little typos like " a little be of love" "I grabbed by the hand" and "one look into you're eyes" XD Simple things, all from your sleepiness lol

I loved the imagery though, second stanza was my personal favorite. Nice work! :)

[Stacey Watts]

This was a very beautiful piece. The flow was good and the words were very well expressed. Nice work.