A grown man cries

this is the second poem i wrote after my girl friend broke up with me

It takes you by surprise when you see a grown man cry,

You know they are tears he can't hide;

If he could he'd rather keep them inside;

You only see these tears when the love of his life is saying good bye.

Author's Note

please don't be too hard on me, i'm a fragile flower when it comes to my poetry.

Reviews

[fallnone]

this poem is strong yet weak, the grammar is good, makes you feel what the writer felt at that time, yet lacks exsperience.