Wings of Ember

inspiration struck me from a source so strange...n dedicate i must this to that person who unknowingly inspired these words...

Abysmally tormented wings of ember,

does to thy faltering heart surrender;

flipping and fluttering

with the cold wind muttering.

restive till thee with fire so dear,

departs from me forever and ever.

Author's Note

Its my first work that I set for an audience...criticize as much as you want..its welcome.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

How beautifully, darkly enchanted; your inspired title pulled me into this place of whispering embers. There seems such a painful struggle to be free in this world of burning. May you rise from the ashes as the Phoenix.

[Kiran]

Thank you so much for this review. Means a lot.