Loving Words

The poem written at the time of my downfall...when i fell for loving words and impressions that had a tale to tell.

Chariot with wings utter not,

Words of comfort to on by passers;

But does true hearts find solace

Upon the midst  of burning sands.

Forlorn before the antiquities of life,

Love that stood above charcoals

Further instilled clouds of joy,

Only to float in realms of Bliss.

Reviews

[Joel Armstrong]

A wise poem.the imagery that you have used here is very good.thank you for sharing this with us.

[Kiran]

Thanks a lot for the review.

[Joel Armstrong]

Could you review mine titled 'a truth long sought' ?

[Kiran]

Sure...why not?

[mariliis]

Ah, what a beautiful piece. A heart warming bliss.

[Kiran]

Its an honour to hear that...thank you.