Pin to a bubble

Dont burst my dreams..basicaly

A dream lingers in my heart.

Never let my dreams burst like a pin to a bubble.

Not tonight especialy tonight.

Were alone under a moonlit sky.

let us be together.

So I wont cry.

Please, oh please.

I beg you ,please.

Dont let my dreams burst like a pin to a bubble.

 

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

i like the similes here, they're really interesting and cool. awesome work

[A]

I have never thought of dreams bursting like a pin to a bubble. I love that idea. Very creative. I really enjoyed this poem! :)

[Sseoni]

I liked how you compared dreams bursting like a pin to a bubble. Great similie and poem as well! :D