Love in outer space

I wrote this watching Gundam seed destiny. And made up my own hort story like poem.

I'm floating in outer space.

I've loved you from the start.

I see my sparkling tears floating.

I lay in a melancholy state.

Wanting to end the wars .

I wan't to be with you .

I see my heart breaking.

I see My heart all over the place.

I see the love that's lingering in my heart.

My love is sparkling.

Like the tears .

It's not ment to fade.

But is saw the ship blow up.

I'm sobbing now.

Nooo!!!!!!!! this can't be.

What'll I do?

We where gonna get married.

I'm wearing the ring.

Staring at it.

Then I bump into you.

Your still alive.

In the middle of space.

I give you a kiss so true.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope u like it

Reviews

[Sseoni]

I found this poem really interesting! It's a bit different from what you usually do, the outer space thing I mean, and it's really intriguing! :D