Road trip from Love to Heaven

a poem about a girl dreaming of her future with the boy she loves..:)

Once I had been to the pond of love

Dabbling and smoothing, 

My angels soft wings

Come from yonder, far above

He was my shining star

Come to save me on a dark night 

From the torment and pain

In an ostentatious little car

And that day shall not be very far

When we shall live in our sweet little world

Love and passion curled

When the morning rays will flow through

And I would wake you with my fresh morning dew

Wake you up on a bright new day

Give you a kiss before you go to work

Hoping you come without any more delay

I will dress up and put on a huge bright smile

I will cook for you and wait a while

Every day will be worthwhile

We are to be couples for life long

I promise to keep you smiling and happy

Till my breath leaves, my body and is gone

You can be strong, listen to our song

Till we unite again and move on

To the palace in paradise where we belong…..

Author's Note

Let me know how you felt...Thankyou..:)

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Dreamy and touchingly beautiful with an innocent quality. I truly like this one.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much...:)

[Kianna]

Dear fancyfati,

Hello, how are you doing today. I was looking through my newsfeed and saw you entered this poem into a contest. The title was lovely so I thought I might read it. I was very wowed by this for how simple, yet poetically complex. It brought a smile to my face and made me think of my own dreams.

Well done :)

Sincerely JazzSoulKeke,

God bless

[Cerise]

Awww...Thank you so much..:)...it meant a lot...

[Tumara Hall]

Wow this brought tears of joy to my eyes. The love and passion for the other really shines through. It isn't the cheesy sort of love but the 'I would do anything for the other' love. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing!

[Time's The Bond]

Beautiful, simply beautiful!

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Subrat]

well...to be true!!!! I just got a single word for this Piece of work......Marvellous. Thanks for giving people like us a privilege to read this nice 1.

[Cerise]

Awww...that was very sweet of you..Thank you for your wonderful words..:)..truly made my day..:)

[B-poet]

Very endearing and poetic. A lovely take on true love at it's best. Nice write. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Lost in Wonderland]

What a lovely image of true loves life together(:

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Any time :)

[marytownsend]

You captured the romance of a young girl's dreams! This is beautiful and very nicely written!

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur kind words..:)

[Shay]

wow this is amazing good write.. thanks for sharing

[Cerise]

Thankyou for such wonderful words..:)

[Penlady]

I FELT as though one person was satisfied enough with him/herself and very willing to share it....it was the way I was being married...I loved it...I have been widowed twice...great poem

[Cerise]

aww....Thankyou for such amazing and kind words..touching...i am sorry for your loss...:)