Perfect Choice

A Poem by Cerise

Love story

My life was a mistake until I met you

Everything would fall into place, I had no clue

All my sorrows and pains were washed

One look at you and I was so lost

The day I met, I knew in my heart

That you are my life and I can’t stay apart

You are my biggest wish come true

I thank god for sending you out of blue

My decision of you was completely right

I chose you, which was perfect and wise

With everyday my love for you shall rise

You are truly my angel in disguise.....

© 2014 Cerise

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Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

Oh my gosh. Words will never share the depth of love I have for this. This brought a smile on my face. It is short and filled with love and affection. The rhyme and beautiful flow made it easier to read and never distracted me from my reading. The title caught my attention first. It had my mind racing with different thoughts before I clicked on it. I am glad that I chose your poem to read tonight. It kept my mind and heart at ease. Its soft and sweet tone is comforting like a lullaby. I like the first word all the way to the very last word. There isn't anything that I didn't like about it. I am impressed! I hope that whoever that this maybe having you under their spell, that everything works out well and that you two will share a happy ending together. Well done! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

Awwwwww.....this is the best review ever..thaaank you so much for taking time to read my peace..am s.. read more

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) you are very welcome my dear friend.

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modtoddinc

Good job, I like the comparison of a mistake to love in disguise; a pearl within an oyster, a hidden treasure, not everything is as it appears. Be aware of tense... past/present, and singular/plural. (ie. I/We met?) This may have been intentional, but distracted me slightly from the message.

~peace, Todd

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)

Coyote Poetry

A beautiful hopeful poem for love. I liked how you led to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank you sooo much

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.

Neon

But, i`m a devil ...Oh.. okay, okay.. you said an angel "IN DISGUISE".. Okay.. okay.. I got it. Thanks. Yeah, me too feeling very happy to have you... outta blue. (Kidding) ;)

Nice poetry. It`s been a long time since I`d read such romantic poetry written with emotions. Liked the structure of the write; the outlines (story-line) .. all things`re perfect. You cool, fancy ;)