You Live In Me....

a short term love

I see you  come with a pout 

Your scent seeking me out

I try to ignore but for how long

Till when will I hold the passion at bay

I am sorry that you dont have a say

You are the light on my deep dark way

You are the rain on a scorching sunny day

You are my soothing balm on the itchy wound

I am sorry that you had to be marooned

I know baby , we were so well in tune

I guess things go wrong even if we assume

I owe you a lot but I cannot stay

Each of us have to find our way

There is no second choice I do know

Like I read you, if only you could read me too..

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[Koudoha Essi Anne-Marie]

i had it read to me out loud and it sounded AMAZING.

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Some relationships can not be long term because the spark fizzles and only one is warm and loving. Better to move on from that sort of relationship. Good rhyming in this poem. Lydi**

[Cerise]

Thank you for review....

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Break ups suck, but sometimes it's a must!
This piece is straight forward and clear,
I just posted a break up piece as well, hope you check
it out, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cerise]

Thank you for review....

[cycy]

its a very short and precise poem i enjoyed reading it well written

[Cerise]

Thank you for revieq..:)

[Calibaster]

this is great! I have to agree with it as well! ;) Nice job.

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This poem rymes it's amazing I loved reading this write.

Kaze~

[Cerise]

Thank you...

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Anytime. :-)))

[Confuser]

I liked it. You told it in a straightforward way. Really enjoyed it. I suppose it's hard to let go and you wrote it well. Thank you.

[Cerise]

Thank you...

[Confuser]

Your quite welcome.

[Laura Lynn]

It's groovy, it jives. It sounds like you were either very interested and disappointed that she could not/ cannot read you, or weren't truly interested at all and now because you are making the best of things in your current place, situation, or set of circumstances.

I like to believe as a rejected love person that all these lines are wrong for someone who wants to be near you when distant. One might wish to argue until some distraction comes along and rules a togetherness out. I'm not sure.

[Neon]

First of all, let me get it straight that.. Yeah, I do live in you.. believe me! *Joking*
Some broken tears got slipped down the eyes to rivers... your emotions`re strong. But hey, come on... let me see your chilly smile now.. ok.. ok.. yeah, you read me so, yes.. I could even do read you as well. Now smile please. *Kidding*

Nice poetry. I like the choice of words! ;)

[Cerise]

Ehhehehe...if i couldnt smile aftr the above words of urs i would be truly be called a devil...i am still ur angel so dont wrry i shall smile as long as i have u..:p....

[Cerise]

Thank you for reading it..:)

[Neon]

So nice to make an angel as happy as the melodic chant of little-swallow.. Oh, you can replace it with "sparrow" it.. (smiling). By the way, thanks for still being my angel... and allowing me to be your wild devil. (Joking) ;)

[Cerise]

Ahahahah...u r such a charmer...what am i gonna do with u...

[Neon]

Being a charmer`s always good to me cause, it makes my angel feels good.. am I right? Ha ha! Umm.. what you gonna do with me? Well.. okay.. grab a sharp knife and run toward me but please don`t forget to pick up an "apple" either or else, i`m afraid.. couldn`t the knife rip off my chest! Ha ha (Smiling) ;)

[Cerise]

Heheh..u r right...idiot....a knife has the ability to go anywer near ur big heart..

[Neon]

Ouch! Now you scaring me. . . but don`t worry, my heart would love to get ripped out if it`s getting torn apart with the hands of an angel ;)

[Cerise]

Ahhh....how cn a knife hurt u...when ur words r enugh to make ma anger run away...

[Neon]

Holy-Crap! How such deep and so glamours words came on your mind to crack on me .. to make my heart totally "benumbed?" Whao! I love you .. Oh, I mean to say.. I love your words .. ha ha

[Cerise]

Hehehehe.....benumbed thnx u for adding a new word to my dictionary....well i am pleased to hear that....

[Neon]

Hey.. are you saving my words and dialouges in your notebook? Ha!

[Cerise]

Yes boss..after our chtt is over..:p

[Neon]

Whao! So, mind if May I ask, why you doing that? I meant, do you want to make "wanted" posters out in your world to put be behind the jail .. in order to teasing an angel? H aha ha

[Cerise]

Hehehehehehe....never..haaawww..how cud u even think dat

[Neon]

Ah~ Thank God, No.. I just thought, you saving my words and then "file a case" on me that I took your heart away of you and just tingled your soul and of course, disturb you in your dreams ...plus always stop you getting some sleep Ha aha (Joking).
But, yeah.. i`m curious, why you saving that? ;)

[Cerise]

I would save it all and publish it so u r officially known world wide as the king

[Neon]

You make me chuckle ;)

[Shay]

i liked the end ryhmes within this poem

[Cerise]

Thank you...