You Live In Me....

a short term love

I see you  come with a pout 

Your scent seeking me out

I try to ignore but for how long

Till when will I hold the passion at bay

I am sorry that you dont have a say

You are the light on my deep dark way

You are the rain on a scorching sunny day

You are my soothing balm on the itchy wound

I am sorry that you had to be marooned

I know baby , we were so well in tune

I guess things go wrong even if we assume

I owe you a lot but I cannot stay

Each of us have to find our way

There is no second choice I do know

Like I read you, if only you could read me too..

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[Brook]

I feel like this flows well throughout. I like the way you've written it too, good job.

[Cerise]

thank you..:)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I found the first verse off putting. it didn't flow and didn't rhyme.
THEN
I read the rest. A brilliant use of words and sentiments.
I'd be inclined to improve the first verse.
Nice one.

[Ency Bearis]

nice poem, and written well

[Stefanie Holmes]

I really enjoyed this piece! Beautiful raw emotions were exposed. Well done!

~Stefanie

[Cerise]

Thank you ...:)

[Dayran]

Its a wonderful window into the world of life and truth.

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Stanley Wilson]

loved the last two lines in particular really well written.

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[stars are far]

That is very well done :)

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Sami Khalil]

"never presume
I owe you a lot but I cannot stay
Each of us have to find our way

There is no second choice I do know"

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)..................

[Cerise]

Thank you for wonderful review..:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................