Enrapture

A Poem by Cerise

Sunlight filters through

A tear shaped eye opens

A tinge of golden dust falls......

© 2014 Cerise

Author's Note

Please feel free to share your views..its my first try

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Neon

Your first try seems like a professional`s top try.

You put your stuffs always around the circle either of love or emotions. In this write, it's about emotions - very deep emotions. Just three lines of the write seemed enough to smash the heart into pieces. You must continue writing such deep stuffs. Keep it up!

All the best if you do bake some more - hot cakes! ;)