ONE DAY

ONE DAY

A Poem by Cerise

Little by little I see it all flow

My anger, my pain and my glow

My smile has gone far away

Torment and anguish in foreplay

When did I lose my heart and soul

Breathlessly wondering who stole.....


My prayers for death are unheard

Wonder whose prayers are answerd

My life passes by at a fast pace

But one day I will find my space

A day when I will finally have it all

Happiness and laughter over all.....

© 2015 Cerise


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When the time is right, you sure will....I loved the rhythm and the flow of the poem
Thanks for sharing!
Maumil

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you for review..:)
Of course, you'll find a comfort in someone's arms. someday. one day.. umm, but before you go hid under someone's arm, would you mind if I take a chance to breathe you? (Kidding)
Your words speak through your heart that's bordered by the darkness. Seemed someone has hurt you allot. Don't say that It was me! Lol I don't hurt you, but I wonder, do I? (Devily smile).
Cheer up ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Hahahahahah....u and ur dialogues thnx u for review...:)
Neon

10 Years Ago

My pleasure ;)
Glad even you could smile. Ah - I was craving to see that smile... sounds cree.. read more
Cerise

10 Years Ago

Haahhaha defi creepy ..:p

The rhythm is good, I've enjoyed it from start to finish. I was able to relate. Nice work! :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you ...:)
great poem, thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading...:)
Everyone goes through those dark times, I guess, where you forget how to smile :/
Very neatly penned the despair and hope to still fight it through :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)
Wow, is the word that comes to mind... I mean the swiftness and fluent flow of this poem fits the wanting to be happy again.... I love the mood of this poem....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)
A sad tragic piece. . .loved the ending...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)
Wow this is really relatable to me specially latly, i love this piece it has a wonderful flow,its simple, honest and clear

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)
This has a musical rhythm, not to mention a profound message about waiting and longing. Well done, Cerise!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)
Well put together with good couplets...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)

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Added on April 2, 2015
Last Updated on May 6, 2015

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Cerise
Cerise

dubai, dubai, United Arab Emirates



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words cant give an accurate detail of who i am or what i am..... more..