i feel a darkness in my soul

I feel a darkness in my soul Why? I do not know Does it cause pain and suffering? No But why is it still there? I do not know Is it hatred for someone that caused me pain? No But why is it still there? I do not know Is it waiting to act or has it acted already? I do not know Is it slowly consuming my soul? Yes But why? I do not know So soon I shall be evil? Yes How long? I do not know Can I stop it? No. because life is evil

Reviews

[Sweet Solitude]

I like it. It seems as if you have a bit of a constant repetition, but still very good for someone who just started writing last night. You will improve greatly. Great job and welcome to the cafe!

~Fallen Angel