Heart on a holiday

Just plan a vacation for your heart.Give it some balm.Give it some rest!

Just give a little rest to your heart,

It has already laboured a lot.

Take it on a vacation

To the beach of felicity!

Where it can dive deep into the pool of composure,

And lay upon the sands of revitalization.

Where it can look into the eye of a hopeful,mesmerising sun,

And build the castles of merriment.

Just take it once,for it will never ask again.

It knows clearly that you will steep into that deep melancholy again,

At the end of the day!

Author's Note

Even the heart needs a restroom.Isn't it?

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This feels like an ad -- I see you have come a little way in your presentation since this piece was launched. I picture a heart, lying out on the beach, reading the paper. Some cool cocomo cheesy music playing in the background.

[fattycbreezy52]

cool cocomo cheesy music-haha may be I just forgot to incorporate that.
Anyway, thanks a lot:)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) yes we do love our melancholy ... but i am taking your suggested vacation without it ;) its such good advice .. better than herbs and spices even
E.

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha absolutely...............Say no to herbs and spices for a while:)

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Whoa whoa whoa! The next time I see the word ''imagery'', I'm gonna think about you. How can you be so flawless with that imagery? I really wanna know. :)
Interesting titles with awesome content. You express realities, emotions and sentiments so properly. You've put abstract imagination into concrete words creating magic with your verses. The poem is beautiful, heart touching and enlightening at the same time. I'm a huuuggee fan of yours. You write so well. Way to go! :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am on cloud nine right now,I guess!Well,the fact that you tried me and my poems ,is the biggest thing.I am highly elated.I can write but who will read it the way I want it to be read?I have got many views but only few of you could understand the depth of it.Thanks to you for spending your precious time !

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

The pleasure, I can assure you is entirely mine. Time spent reading good poetry is worth everything and you write really, really well. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

So i was right......you've got mad skills!!!
absolutely loved it!!!
beautifully penned!!!
:)

[fattycbreezy52]

thanks a lot!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Jamestown]

Love the metaphor use, really creative and a solid message delivered!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks for the kind words of appreciation!