back and forth

back and forth

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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Life's a boat which needs to be emptied as soon as possible

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I cannot reach the shore 
Just moving back and forth
The water thrashes me
Back and forth
The wind sweeps me
Back and forth
TIme has sweeped me off my feet
I am not where I was!
TIme wooed me again like he did once
He was indeed celestial and new
He had a hypnotizing voice pushing me to the earth's boundaries,
Until I could shoot the revolving moon with my innocent glance .
His hazel eyes met my cocoa and in the background the world fell apart

Now I am in a deep ocean
Reeking of weed and alcohol
Unable to write with a vision
The vision which has long been lost.
Fetch me one,even when there's no reward
I want life to make me fall of its grace and present a heavenly award

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
There is a vast difference betwee the familiar physical time and the invisible psychological time

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this is a really cool piece. thanks for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

thanks for reading.I am glad:)
Give us more, dear poet.
Our poetic natures are also boats that need to be emptied. Keep sharing your inspirations.

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

I really wanted someone to use the word "boat" while reading this particular poem.Thanks for using t.. read more
Misery

10 Years Ago

Always welcome.

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Added on April 12, 2015
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fattycbreezy52
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..