Is the fault actually in my stars?

I am screwed,literally!

Why is everything in a state of pandemonium?

You,me,this earth and all those tiny little creatures.

I have a passion for things aesthetic and creative,

They say I have long artistic fingers,designed to bring forth that creativity.

When I finally produce it,they still find faults with my imagination and compel me to ask only one thing,

"Is the fault actually in my stars?"

Reviews

[Isabel25]

Definitely not. The fault is not in anybody's stars. It is in the eyes and hearts and minds of others who are so blinded by various factors in life, that they often forget to notice how beautifully our stars twinkle and spread light. Good one Fatty :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Absolutely correct Annie..Thanks a lot for the review. Your comments are always positive and encouraging:*

[Stonz P.]

The Hitchhiker? "long, artistic fingers"
Used to be a favourite in school.

Sometimes the fault is in our stars, but most of the time its just the wrong kind of space (a*s)holes which are messing with em.. Damn that pun!
Just remember the things you want to remember... the rest is just static ;)

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes absolutely. The rest is just static...lovely comment and amazing review. Thanks haha;)

[Karen Arizona]

Wonderful writing, thought provocative, and creative. You seem to do just fine, fattycbreezy52, so I wouldn't worry what anybody else thinks. No person on this earth has the power to align the constellations so why give them the power? I relate to your words and especially about my writing.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I needed to read your post today.

[fattycbreezy52]

that is such an emotional comment.I love when people say they can relate..you are amazing and you should know this.Thanks for the review

[~]

we can decide to listen to the ones that make us fly up to the stars, or bring us so down we cannot even see them. Picking the right people to surround ourselves with, is an art within itself.

:D smiling at you being screwed literary**

[fattycbreezy52]

true-story
loved the encouragement.We should surround ourselves with right and good people,like i am surrounded by you:)

[fattycbreezy52]

hehe.Yes,i am actually screwed:)

[~]

well thank you for thinking I am good company :D likewise - i mean since you are screwed wink*

[Pushkar Prabhat]

every art is a mirror to the self...........
the fault one sees is the fault within one's own self.........
what do stars know......huh.....

intriguing write......
i loved it!!!
:)

[fattycbreezy52]

that means the fault is not in my stars.
yes!
thanks a lot:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yes......yes........yes!!!! you are welcome...........!!!! :) :)