Ephemeral

Every deleting photograph of that handsome face

From her phone gallery,

Hit her chest like a paper ball,

Given the fact that he was "ephemeral"

Reviews

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love this image of being hit, time and time again with those paper balls... reminds me of tossing them A Trina S in eleventh grade because I liked her so much and tormented her... though she never knew it...

deleting such pictures are difficult... even in short time frames people can have great impacts on us...

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha nice to know about Trina S in the eleventh grade.Must be missing those days,i see.And yes,photographs aren't just faces and figures after all.Right.Thanks a lot FT for all the amazing reviews:)it keeps me encouraged every time I pen down something

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you are welcome for the story... and it was my pleasure to comment on this wonderful piece :) ... keep penning...

[Passengerr]

I guess what you're trying to say is that given the fact he was only for a while, he wouldn't be missed much.. Love the use of the 'paper ball'.

[fattycbreezy52]

no no...You have got it right.But given the fact,he was only for a while......he would still be missed and every photo of him was tormenting her soul:)
Nevertheless,it's not bad a review.I love hearing what readers say.Thanks a lot:)

[Passengerr]

You're welcome.. Thanks for the crystal clear explaination.

[Passengerr]

You're welcome.. Thanks for the crystal clear explaination.