Weaving a circle

Weaving a circle

A Poem by fattycbreezy52


Unwrinkled feet,
Tapping the verdant lawn.
Mellow hands,
Depicting a strong bond.
Saccharine laughter,
Filling the air with euphony.
Every circle,not just a play.
Every round,not just a gambol.
Every turn,
Clockwise or anti-clockwise,
Strengthening the pledge of sisterhood.
Taking the implication of "friend circle"
Literally and seriously.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


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You combine such wonderful pictures with lovely poetry. This is flowing, melodic verse with an air of mystique and fairytale to it. Wonderfully told.

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

Yes,art has become a sort of passion .Thanks a lot:)
Beautiful artwork and description. You took the reader to good places and you left them with positive thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

thanks Coy:)Glad I could do that!
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
such a beautifully poetic description of 'weaving a circle' of friendship... the imagery dances off the screen as does the strength of friendship bonds, no matter the direction in which they move... nice work, FCB, with words and image...

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

thanks again for such amazing comments.Gives me immense joy:)
Hey my sista from another mista - I like this one. An honage to solidarity and a celebration of womanhood.
Smashing phrasing - loved that word choice 'euphony' - class
The imagery is hypnotic.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

Thanks Anto:) I am glad! :)
Well penned!
I am positive that the ladies of WC are going to eat this piece up!
Well written and delivered!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

Haha I hope they do it at a relaxed and slow pace. Thanks James for an amazing review:)

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fattycbreezy52
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..