A collective avant-garde

You and me.

A sheer and unmitigated eye contact.

  Minds frisking,  

At the very thought of our favourite song.

In the background,

This groundbreaking downpour.

Want to be a controversial avant-garde composer?

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the title drew me in...and then i danced with the poem...

liked that "groundbreaking downpour"---

yes, controversial, better than unnoticed...

you say much in few words...and i always feel that "less is more"---

[fattycbreezy52]

Wow this review truly made me happy and "less is more" has sort of becoming my mantra haha.Thanksa lot jacob:)

[fattycbreezy52]

Sort of become*Oops

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How could one say no? Love this composition with its promise of unbridled love... you are so good with words... great art choice too!

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha.........I am humbled.Very many thanks,FT:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A deeply romantic invitation said in the heat of an adoring moment and captured in a sensual verse FBC. You always find lovely artwork too.

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha yes,skills;D
thanks a lot for the review;)