The Divorce

Cool kitchen table

Holding me up

What did you just say?

I dont understand.

Ozzy Osborne

Crooning in there

Is it my fault momma?

Tears hit the table and sizzle

I just don’t understand.

Is he eating another bat?

It’s nobody’s fault?

Then why are you leaving?

More sizzle.

I still don’t understand.

Reviews

[L. Michelle Corp]

Cool table, yet tears that sizzle. Interesting poem! Thought provoking...

[F.B. Lindsey]

Thank you!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Divorce is painful for everyone involved. Children in particular.
I like your unique delivery,

[F.B. Lindsey]

Thank you!

[Perkele.7885]

Got a nice fresh approach with this poem, with the conversation angle, I like it!
You need some quotation marks!

[F.B. Lindsey]

Thanks for the encouragement and input!

[Relic]

Could it be you don't pay enough attention to her? Diversions like ozzy can really be a metaphor for a love that is lost. Mama, there's no home to come to anymore. Good poem and welcome.

[F.B. Lindsey]

Thx for the encouragement!