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A foggy haze. Moving bodies

It feels warm in here. Or is it just me?

Darkness. Then light. Pulsating.

Excuse me. My bad.

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Who is that? Squint.

Lean against the rail. Look cool.

You want another drink? I think I am good. 

She moved on. Where’s my friend?

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Smells like smoke. No REAL fire.

Just sparks. Where did she go?

My friend! You want another drink?

Sure- thanks. I have to let her know.

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Excuse me. I think you’re beautiful. 

Idiot! Oh- Ok. Thanks!

She moved on. My friend laughs.

I don’t smell smoke. It’s time to go.

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Reviews

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Lol. I loved that!
Great imagery. Poor guy.

[F.B. Lindsey]

Thank you!

[Stars and Whales]

Welcome to Writers Cafe! If you ever need anyone to look over some of your work, just let me know. If you want to get some reviewing points in as well, feel free to check out some of my work. Thanks and good luck. This piece is very good, so I hope you will keep writing and sharing!

[wordman]

interesting write,enjoyed the read

[F.B. Lindsey]

Thanks for the encouragement!

[wordman]

my pleasure