Musical Pills

 

Musical Pills♫

 

 Cha. Cha. Cha.

Sang her musical pills.

Shaking in the bottle,

ready to kill.

    ♫

Ding. Ding. Clash.

They scattered in her hand.

Tylenol, Advil, Morphine.

A deadly musical band.

     ♪

Gulp. Gulp. Gulp.

She chugged them down.

They sang down her throat.

A fatal sound.

     ♪

Smash. Crack. Kabang.

The band was done.

They finished their song.

Her life is gone.

 

 ♫

  

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chaos]

Thank you for using my suggestion. I consider it an honor when a fellow poet feels what I feel.

Chaos~

[Chaos]

I love the images and also the personification of the pills in general. The last line is too weak for this piece. I would suggest using a stronger image; "her life is gone". I don't even know if that's strong enough considering how strong this piece of art is. I love the poem and sound.

Chaos~