I'm Sorry

 

How many times have I spoken these words where no one could hear

More times than I could ever say to make this conscience clear

How many times have I said the words wishing you near

More times than I’ve whispered them into your ear

How many times have I said this as I shed a tear

More times than I’ve ever shown fear

How many times have I

More than you

 

So many times have I whispered these words all on my own

Far more than you could ever think to clone

So many times have I said them alone

Far more than the ring of the phone

So many times have I

Far more then

 

What more could I say here than this

Having told you in barely a hiss

What more could I

Have told you

Author's Note

It is not punctuated. I know.

Reviews

[poet_feefee]

I am a visual person, so this poem is very appealing to me. It makes me think of tear drops and drips through a funnel. Each time it falls there is a little less than the time before until there is just nothing left.

[747]

I hadn't thought of that, though I quite agree now that you mentioned it.

[B]

Its easy to think i am sorry
then actually to go say it

to me it happens twice a year lol
i suck at sorry

interesting write

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You keep stabil form . It s make impression very strong . Word flow and keep me inside of your world. Words of pain and solitude words can tell own story. I t s deep and moving it s best of poet calling.

[747]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

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Yes I did.

[AmjadPenboyoflight]

i enjoy this poem
it speaks like something very true

you are skill writer

[Astrid]

I like the structured form that you used; making it descend and getting shorter each time. I can feel the emotion in it as well.

[Anonymous -]

I could feel the emotion you were portraying through your words , I'm sorry , the only title that could fit the body of words used. Very cool ! I liked it.

[Breezy]

First and foremost, I love the formatting of the poem. Secondly, the rhyming works really well and the flow is good. The lack of punctuation threw me off at first, but it works. Also, I could feel the emotion throughout. Great job. :)

[BeeBev]

I love the layout of this poem and found it to be really heartfelt and personal. Really lovely.

[Stephen]

I like it! I love the design of the poem and the style. Good rhyme. A meaningful poem. Thanks for expressing yourself.