Freak On A Leash

When the dark side of love is Sine qua non.

take me by the hand... or scruff
but promise not to be too rough

i drink the waters of your ache

now pooling beneath me, an expanding lake

you slake my thirst but not my fury
i take my time, and you don't hurry

i savor the saltiness of your wont
posture rigid, muscles taut

(don't need to fight to get what i want)

drenched in the oils of your sweat

i feel you shake, then you are spent

you told your  story ... that made you weak
i could almost love you ... if you didn't speak

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The passion of love, without which nothing has meaning, justifies the ardour of the melding - anything less is just a sexual act! Great share my friend - makes the reader think... :-)

[Jason Shadows]

The soul a complex puzzle to solve and yet within the cosmos it unlocks the most important value...understanding. Emotion and thought rushes the mind within this one. Great write.

[felioness]

Thanks for the read and comment...a lovely surprise!

[Jason Shadows]

Your welcome. :)

[Abhishek Izy]

This is a very powerful erotic imagery over here and I absolutely loved it. You have piece'd it together very very well.

My fav line:
"i could almost love you ... if you didn't speak"

[felioness]

Thanks so much! That is my favourite line too!