last tear drop

it is about a girl who fell in love with a guy who hides himself in the rain or something like that

Every time my tears fall i am reminded of you,

Even all the little things you do.

When the rain starts to fall,

I start to remember you,everything and all.

You are always there when it rains

And when you disappear i start to act insane.

Why must you hide your face in the mist.

Is it because you don't want to hurt me with your fist?

You stay in the rain to prevent me from hurting.

But maybe this is just our beginning?

Even if you hurt me i will still be here,

With the love you've given me i will shed one last tear.

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Stay in the rain so your tears wont be noticeable... Good write, I'm glad you befriended me i enjoyed your poems even though I'm not yet in love the depth on it got me

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When the rain starts to fall,
I start to remember you,everything and all.

You are always there when it rains
And when you disappear i start to act insane.
I love that part 100/100