eternity clock

it is about a girl who prays to her beloved's soul to comeback to her.

May these prayers reach you,

As they always do.

May the wind carry my tears ,

As well as taking away my fears.

Let alone,the breeze may comfort me,

But it will never take to me to the place beyond the sea.

You my love,who i still long to be by your side,

For you who promised me that i will be your eternal bride.

How much will you make me wait?

For us to be together,driven by faith.

Each passing day,i sense your presence,

But why do i feel like i am surrounded by silence.

As i wait for you, my feelings grow stronger.

But i don't know if i could wait much longer.

Even so,may the sound of my voice bring you luck,

And may it last forever on the eternity clock .

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Your poems are great... Just one of our teenage fantasies i guess... Please do keep writing(:
100/100