My Pain in 11 Words

My Pain in 11 Words

A Poem by Fenix Flight
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11 words

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Bite my lip 

              giggle 

                         slice
                      A little piece of heaven dies

© 2014 Fenix Flight


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An intriguing 11 words, for sure. One could read all kinds of meaning into them. Well done!

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Love this! You explain your pain so easily. And these 11 words are packed with such broud emotion :)

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Fenix Flight
Fenix Flight

Kingdom Of Amythest, ME



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Please Call me Fenix (Fen-nicks) (The FEN is pronouced the same way you would pronouce the FEN in Fenway) its more my name then the one I was given at birth. I wont put my life story here. You will se.. more..