im sorry i killed you baby

its how i killed my dead ex girlfriend tea

im sorry i killed you sweet heart
as we fight in the car
you cry as you drive the car
it raining you lose control
as the car hits a tree 
i see you die slow and painful
i survive it you dont
im sorry sweet tea

Author's Note

i hope you like it

Reviews

[gigglesarefun]

Very sad poem..
I love it, but watch your grammar. Bad grammar ruins the flow of the poem. Also, try to add some punctuation.
Other than that, keep writing, you have talent.

[guiltyascharged]

ohhh myyy. this is so saddd. i would cry. i would be like "WHYYY!? TAKE ME INSTEAD!" or something along those lines. OR i would be screaming "why do the good die young!?". or call the cops... popo.... 5-0. whatever you wanna call e'm. ambulance. really good write for such few words in it.

[Silent Knight]

So sad...

[dreaming dame]

So sad! :(

[stars are far]

nice
but same time it leaves a tear after it

[.......]

This is so sad.

[The Cute 1]

aweeee this is sad

[Mariel]

That's... just so sad. I do like it though, but it's kind of haunting in a way.

[Just a Dream]

that is so sad. but really good i like it

[An owl on the moon]

There is an overwhelming sadness here.. regret mingled in the rain.. longing to go back.. to undue it all..