Fears Hinder Passions

I wrote this way back in July and it's really short, but I kind of like it. So I wanted to share it

In love with the stars--

Afraid of the dark.

In love with the heights--

Afraid of the fall.

Reviews

[M Edward H]

A exquisitely succinct juxtaposition of desire and conflict. I can feel your mood. I, also, have been there and struggled with my conflicts. Love this poem!

[Esther]

Thank you very much!

[Tori Jones]

Afraid of the light is more like it...But I like the way it is written, everyone has different feelings. Keep up the good work!

[Esther]

you're so kind thank you ahhh

[Tori Jones]

You're funny...

[Amanda]

This is great! You captured the dual nature of those things that we all want really well. :)

[Esther]

Thanks so much Amanda!

[Karmee]

So very nice,
flows very nicely too.
Keep writing always

[Esther]

Thank you :) I will keep writing