I can feel the heat rising just it's hitting me

i wrote this Aug.30.09 the day before the next

I can feel the heat rising up it's hitting me in the face . Every minute makes me shiver . I feel cold without you. But meaningless with you ..

    When you talk I walk . When life comes at you don't give it a chance if you know it will be right . You too have to become more then you are .

                 Things will change and people will too but I'll always be me with or without you...............

Author's Note

what do you think