train

got a ticket for a train
going to see my dear friend
i sat across an empty chair
i then ordered coffee
just to experience how it's like
having a coffe on a train
well, it's nice actually!
i just want to know
how it feels drinking it
while the train is moving.

another experience
after getting off the train
stepped out
and got into the escalator
stayed on the right side
that's when you would know and you would feel
you are really in England.

Author's Note

first time in England train...couple of years ago...

Reviews

[Cassandra D.]

This was an interesting poem.
It reminds me of a book I'm reading in school that every chapter is actually a poem.
It's entitled: Locomotion by Jacqueline Woodson.
I recommend you to read that!

[fhamie]

@kit kat>>> it's so nice you can relate how it's like drinking coffe on a train..ha ha! loved it! thank you. :D

[deeps]

Awesome write. Yeah I have been on trains before and i love the coffee on there. I can sense the imagery you have written in this.