jitters

chapter 2

i feel the jitters whenever he arrives
don't know what to do when he stares and say hi
i wanted to hide coz i'm too shy
this still i feel when i'm with him all day.

i patiently wait til the dawn breaks
i watched him sleep and hear gentle noise from his breath
i gently hold his hand
i love you that's what i want to say.

honey, be with me and stay
don't go til the sun sets
longing to be with you all night and day
all i ever dream is to be with you
until my dying day.

Reviews

[Theresa]

A really romantic piece. Wanting to be with someone not wanting to be without them. Great piece.

[Cassandra D.]

I loved the rhyming you've added to this poem.

[mystic soul]

wonderful!!

[Jibey]

Kind of romantic idyll - all a-flutter

[topsyturvy]

I like this poem, it has a sort of story telling feel to it, gentle yet stimulating.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Love and emotion leading to kind and sweet words at the end. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[fhamie]

@friend writers---- thank you.

[deeps]

This is wonderful, like it alot!