Big Tree

chapter 1

commmenced a single stitch
waited long years to finish it
a single stitch
where love has built.

what a big surprise
when love started to bloom
 when i taught him how to make
a single crosstitch.

couldn't believe at first
how this man
shared my simple interest
knowing that
he's every woman's man.

i was o'er the moon
my heart melted
my hands felt the jitters
i knew i was in love
i just couldn't understand.

from a single stitch
i then framed a finished crosstitch
it showed a BIG TREE
stood steadily
that seems can withstand
every storm and stong wind.

all i wish...
that our love for each other
is as strong as the BIG TREE
conquer the storm
fight for our love
til the end of time.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like your style of writing. Each description in very paragraph made the poem complete. Ending was outstanding.
Coyote

[ChristianM]

Being a fan of undying love myself and a traveler still searching for what I once had, I appreciate the portrayal here. Nowadays many people shy away from "true love" because the world had become so modernized.
Well done

[Dev]

This tells a simple story so beautifully !! Its completely "Aww" worthy. The eemotions are amazin !!

[fhamie]

friend writers ---thank you>>>>this is based on my experience..loved it too..my emotion flows while i'm writing it..

[deeps]

I liked this wite so-so much this is very well written and full of emotion.
This just flows as well. Wonderful write.