our journey

chapter 4

on the day we met
i knew our journey has started
more than a decade
i'm glad our love doesn't fade.

could it be magic
or so realistic
you by my side
is like a guiding light.

i love you so...
that's all i know...
to the world i show
the you're my all.

Reviews

[Theresa]

Just by reading this you can tell how much in love you really are. It's a nice change from the usual depressing poems that are posted.

[Cassandra D.]

very wonderful indeed!

[Jibey]

flows a bit roughly but the central idea is dreamily romantic

[topsyturvy]

Ahhh such bliss.:) Your poems are amazing to read, another one here warms and captivates the heart of your readers. Well done :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful series of poetry. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry.
Coyote

[deeps]

Amazing written and such wonderful emotion out poured.