"AURORA"

love shines so bright
sometimes like a northern light
from a distance sight
brings full of life.

i named this love "aurora"
a love with beautiful aura.

i can see the colours of his laughter
whilst he feels my gentle whisper
and the reflections of hues
promises that our love will go on forever.

Author's Note

a big thank you to Coyote Poetry>>>for suggesting a title>>i've changed the title now to "AURORA" (temporary title was" a love with beautiful aura")---i do appreciate my friend writers comments and suggestion.! again thank you.

Reviews

[Eternal Poet]

This is beautiful-keep up the great writing!

[shanise]

very good comparison, I love how emotion rolls out of it almost like waves!

[Shellie]

PS A favourite :)

[Shellie]

Thats fabulous. Northern lights compared to the light of love. Genius. (no mail) well done!

note: just change i to I, itd look better with caps ok.

[Luther]

promises that our love will go on forever. DIG IT!

[poetic soul]

wow...this is a splendid, light, beautiful expression of a tender yet strong love...

:) Love,
Krishna

[EmpressPoetess]

Beautiful write.

[Iota]

Love is indeed special and true love is rare, like Aurora's. Beautiful poetry.

[Diego]

Short and sweet. You painted a picture more beautiful than the Northern Lights themselves.

[Cassandra D.]

I loved this.
It was so beautiful and very sweet.