"friends..they thought"

they laugh with them,
they joined the party with them
with all the people
she thought were all their true friends.

she counted them all
 and she lost her count
surely now...those friend she thought were...
most of them were gone.

if he only knew, how badly her heart bruised
when one moment in time,he didn't stand by her side.
some told him lies about her
it saddened her... coz he believed.

but she fought for her love
she wanted to fight in silence
and there she was...
regain the love.

Author's Note

a love that was once tried to be ruined...

Reviews

[Theresa]

The ups and downs of love are represented well within your book. This one the downside but you express your feelings well and get the reader to feel what you went through.

[Cassandra D.]

i thought i this was very well expressed :)

[Jenny Nelson]

Betrayal and fighting for what you want and deserve. Nice job!

[Jibey]

Well presents those moments of betrayal that undermine trust...

[topsyturvy]

This saddened me a little for I know the feeling, and somehow you were able to show the feelings clearly. Its in a way a betrayal of trust from your friends or other people whom you cherished when suddenly they go behind your back and ruin things for you. Its a nice little sad poem, the best thing about it, readers can relate to it :P