"forever...i want to stay"

there she was...
standing, waiting...
didn't know what to expect
will he be there?
she's not expecting really...

she's avoiding disappointment
looking straight
frightened
 what future is at stake.

Oh dear!
 he's there waving at her
she wanted to cry
that's a big surprise!

No words...
only teardrops...
his warm embrace
took away all the pains.

she said...
this is gonna be
a brand new day
and forever...i want to stay.

Author's Note

chapter 8 of "love is you"

Reviews

[fhamie]

Thanks for the nice review. :)

[GioVonnie]

I really like this, First time I ever read a story/poem before. I wasn't sure if I was going to like it before I started reading it, but it was awesome, the story line was great and it has a good flow. I also like how it builds up before the final chapter.

[Theresa]

I think this is my favorite out of all of them. It has a hppy ending which I'm a sap for. It also flows perfectly and almost has a rhythm to it as you read. The beginning your in suspense waiting to see if he'll be there and then he is, perfection.

[Jibey]

Awwwww!

[Cassandra D.]

Aww...
I truly loved this one!