I Love You Mom

I couldn't find enough words...

To say how much I love my Mom...

I am not a perfect daughter...

But she always think I am.

 

One morning...

My heart broke into small pieces..

I never felt so much pain in my life..

When I saw Mom suffers in pain.

 

I stayed beside her...

And cried...and cried...and cried...

I love you Mom...

And I'll see you in my dreams...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

for my loving Mom...I miss her so much...

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

This very touching and heartfelt write shows she is within. Excellent write.

[fhamie]

Thank everyone for the nice review.
I really miss my mother...;(

[topsyturvy]

Aww :( I'm so sorry bout your mom :( I love my mom soooo much too, she has given me everything I could ever ask for.. And more. This was such a beautiful poem.

[Theresa]

As short as it is it still managed to make me tear up. The last line really pulled on the heart strings. We like to think that our moms are indestructible and when we realize they're not words can't even explain what we feel. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Ron]

One of the most appealing, moving poems on the site.

[Cassandra D.]

this was very beautiful.
thanks for sharing

[melissa]

very nice. its always hard losing someone you love i dont know what i ever do when i lose my mother....

[Iota]

It has been awhile since I lost my mother but it was an event that set me on another path in life. It is good you are writing and expressing yourself about her. Nice work.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for your mother. A mother love is forever. We need to keep their memory alive. You wrote a very good poem to remember your precious mother.
Coyote