Meeting Luna

Always from a distance, I gaze upon your beauty

I gaze upon you

Radiance overshadowing the darkness

I reach out

My fingers meeting the coldness of the night

There was nothing but dusty diamonds cast against dark velvet

No sound but the crickets’ lullaby

Not a cry, I know I’m alone.

Shifting with the months, I watched you.

A sigh escapes me

I already know you’re too far to reach.

 

No longer a child.

I gaze upon you once more.

Years pass as the seasons shift

I grew, molded by time and colored by experience.

You remain ever beautiful and glowing.

“Sweet Immortal.” Escapes my smiling lips

Chuckles full of reminisce following after.

A little hand points towards you.

My companion, such a sweet child.

“Luna.” He speaks.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I gaze upon you once more.

Years pass as the seasons shift

I grew, molded by time and colored by experience.

You remain ever beautiful and glowing."

Beautiful, romantic, splendid...:)..........

[fiery-san]

thank you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Frieda P]

This is most exquisite, 'nothing but dusty diamonds cast against dark velvet' such vivid imagery, lovely read.

[fiery-san]

thank you Frieda, I'm glad you like it. ^_^

[khalid]

very nicely penned. i like how you have expressed the feelings of love and passion in such a nice way.
very nicely penned poem..

[fiery-san]

thank you very much for the review, khalid, I'm glad you like it. ^_^