the title of this poem is im going to alaska on a fishing boat and i hope i never see me again

all 22 words are the title

you lie there,

disconnected. on the

ash-stained linoleum, of your

dreary studio apartment. 

blue-red strobes

paint the walls.

dancing; pulsating.

something so familiar

can't seem to recall

the last part.

a siren's lulling,

crying through

the night.

a frantic concerto,

pleading 

"you cant go home"

under the double latched

inornament 

steel door

pill bottle shadow spires

and candlestick cityscapes

ordain spiritspilt floor

the radio tower light

blinking softly

in the corner-

a reset kitchen

timer

i could have

swore, i had more

ti-

 

 

  

 

Reviews

[Relic]

I see it as cold death. Interesting poem.

[jessyyjacob]

Hi,
I see people change mind so quickly.
It takes a day even to earn penny
But to eat away something it just needs a desire a motto to do..

Few people dream place it is .
I am not sure are savings account in Swiss bank full all my life savings..
People just ask like give a cigarette I just need it ..


People even won't care family and I see wives in need of money are just sleeping I see few husbands take advantage of sleeping, it is too much exploiting kids families nowadays in Hyderabad and drugs are like chocobar..
How can we control
A simple guy earns whole life time to just spend with his wife and people just can't even think they are just crossing line, I am sure I wish these people must get deadly diseases like AIDS..
I am not correct I am not concerning about people..
In society..anti social elements..

Jessy Jacob

[Kady R.]

Hiiii Everett Dulin!!!

Quite the imagery in this poem. I've never been to Alaska. Looks like a beautiful place from tv though. Anywho.

Something about visiting a place that makes us never the same again. Good or bad.

Thanks for sharing🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰

[Davidgeo]

You read like neutral milk hotel fan. (that sounds insulting if you haven't heard their music)

[Ms claws]

Wow! What a poem for sure!
Very descriptive and graphic!
Every line of every stanza sings clear images!
A wonderful work!

[redd Brick Keshner]

I've had friends that have gone to Alaska and returned never to be the same again. The last stanza is epic!🙏🏻🕊️

[Chris]

The title DOES speak volumes...

Some moments fill our memories - kaleidoscope flashes of good, bad, and life-happenings.

[.]

Dude this is really deep and it made me stare at a blank wall. I don't know. i hope you dont lie there disconnected anymore. thank you for sharing

[Arundass TP]

Alaska is great place, I heard. Nicely written poem 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟