you wont find cigarettes in the snow

"watching her become emotionally distanced"

the look in your eyes

the panicked subtlety

withdrawals will have you itching

dont ask me to never leave

take your six steps back

darling i know im boring

i see you scanning ashtrays

because you asked me to quit smoking

calm down

the moment will last forever

so calm down

you arent ready for auburn's weather

an end will never come

its a sum of its means

so calm down

its okay we werent meant to be

there are no cigarettes in this weather

im too trapped in my grief

if youre waiting for your moment

nows your time to leave

so darling calm down

its okay if you still love me

calm down

you dont need a reason to leave

Author's Note

im still working on it

Reviews

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What the hell? I’m speechless.
Can I say this is one of my favorite of yours…
Last stanza left me in the dark place, alone.

Dude you are THE talent himself.
But please quit smoking.